Thursday, January 16, 2014

"Zu Zavdykaan inde zu Amonu; kur a Sinama Morozhka"--a Caaniyan

"The Philosopher and the Lover; to a Mistress Dying"
Sir William Davenant

Lover
Your Beauty, ripe, and calm, and fresh,
As Eastern Summers are,
Must now, forsaking Time and Flesh,
Add light to some small Star.

Philosopher
Whilst she yet lives, were stars decay'd,
Their light by hers, relief might find:
But Death will lead her to a shade
Where Love is cold, and Beauty blinde.

Lover
Lovers (whose Priests all Poets are)
Think ev'ry Mistress, when she dies,
Is chang'd at least into a Star:
And who dares doubt the Poets wise?

Philosopher
But ask not Bodies doom'd to die,
To what abode they go;
Since Knowledge is but sorrow's Spy,
It is not safe to know.

--------------------------------

"Zu Zavdykaan inde zu Amonu, kur a Sinama Morozhka"

Amonu
Vore ederavna, leznakh inde serkhaala, inde mynkhata,
Eki vyrjaati Eztraiji evon,
Tenzeva jetzta, krona inde kaan avnakhazhka,
Suuram kur a zetellkha nessur fozh.

Zavdykaan
Taka damya jetzta vifava, zetellkhai kormorovdai evogon,
Senn fozh nach damya, sezhuanno enkontragan:
Per Morne a'damya vol'pezarovu kur u mortuume
Kuusu amona evova thirri, inde ederavna nesvizda.

Amonu
Amonai (senn virestai evozhka teld lautaraani)
Penzen nin kaadi Sinama, kuan morova,
Kamvova kenesser ker a zetellkha:
Inde vur veleryovu neskessem zai lautaraani zavadai?

Zavdykaan
Per necht'vrakunat korpai avrakhai ker Morne,
Ker vaare tegu zavon;
Avair'zavaja zyna evova zu vizteilu nach desava,
Zavayam necht'evovu kesun.

Tuesday, January 14, 2014

RIJAN: Conditional

Wow. Only one post for all of 2013. I've resolved to fix the whole "not posting" thing. I need to work more on my conlangs; they're relaxing, and as I'm finishing up my senior year of high school, I desperately need catharsis.

Sooooo.....I've scoured the school library for books of poetry, and I'm picking out poems to translate. It helps with the lexicon and the grammar to actually have material to translate into the conlang, and since translation challenges online are few and far between (no, I'm NOT poring through Reddit boards for one or two measly challenges), I guess it's up to me to create my own. That said, I'll add this: Fellow conlangers! I'll be posting more translated works of literature, along with the original works, on this blog in the future. I might even translate some of my own work. If you feel up to the challenge, this is me throwing down the virtual gauntlet. Translate these into your own 'langs. Post them online if you dare. Leave comments with the translations.

BUT--I haven't translated my first poem of 2014 completely, yet. I started on it this evening, and was doing fine, until I hit a line that requires the conditional tense. And I haven't worked on Rijan in so long, I forgot the conditional. So I just spent the past hour riffling through my scattered notes and journals, hunting down the page on which I left my conditional notes. I haven't posted them yet, so I'll post them now.

For those of you who don't know what the "conditional tense" (or, properly, the "conditional mood") is, it's a grammatical mood (go figure) based on a hypothetical condition. I'm referring to your "ifs" and "woulds." While in English, the conditional verb is preceded by an auxiliary verb like "would," in Rijan, the verb "would" is replaced by a suffix.

Verb Endings

-AM
Myya'li       -agaz
Vore'li       -agav
Malya       -agavu
Damya       -agava
Nuztra       -agazar
Vuztra       -agazai
Senn'li       --agan

-EM
Myya'li       -egez
Vore'li       -egev
Malya       -egevu
Damya       -egeva
Nuztra       -egezar
Vuztra       -egezai
Senn'li       -egen

-OM
Myya'li       -ogoz
Vore'li       -ogov
Malya       -ogovu
Damya       -ogova
Nuztra       -ogozar
Vuztra       -ogozai
Senn'li       -ogon